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PostSubject: [FanFic] A Matter of Customs II   Wed Jun 27, 2007 4:53 am

A Matter Of Customs II


Cast:

Liza Wang Ming Chuen as Lui Fok Ming/Madame
Danny Lee Sau Yin as Tao Ling Shan
Lawrence Ng as Lau Ka Man
Jessica Hester Hsuan as Vung Moon Fun
Yu Li as Yu Li
Damien Lau as Lau Chung Yan
William Cho as Lam Chi Kit
Joyce Tang as Wan Pui Ling
Wong Ka Lok as Michael: Liza’s godson
Michael Tong as Joe
Wong Hei as Lam Chi Kwong
Jacqueline Lee as Lau Yee: Damien’s daughter
Chun Pui as Kon Tin Yea: Jackie’s father
Joe Ma as Kon Man Long: Jackie’s brother:

Mak Cheung Ching as Lee Zhi Seks
Jade Leung as Bao Gei Heurng
Jenny Shing as Lily: Ming and Shan’s daughter
Ming’s mother in law: Yuen
Kwong’s mother

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PostSubject: Re: [FanFic] A Matter of Customs II   Wed Jun 27, 2007 4:54 am

Story

Kwong is in the coma, after his colleague saving him from the sea. Shan is condemned for 4 years in the jail. Ming gives birth to a daughter, who becomes then goddaughter of her good friend, Chun Yan. Heurng becomes a housewife. Kwong awakes 1 year later.

Custom’s members: Lui Fok Ming, Lau Ka Man, Vung Moon Fun, Wan Pui Ling, Joe, Lee Zhi Seks

Episode 1

Moon is looking for Kwong in the sea. A ship of Customs, leaded by Madame Lui comes and helps her. Then they find Kwong faint, can’t move. In the hospital, everybody is waiting for Kwong’s result in front of ICU’s room. The doctor gets out, and asks who Kwong’s relative is. His mother says that she is his mother. Kit, Moon, Ming, are around too. Kwong is in the coma, we don’t know when he awakes. Everybody is disappointed, and goes to see him, and tries to awake him, but she is stopped by Kid. His mother weeps. Ming looks sad.
Back home, she is thinking of Shan’s lawsuit in Netherlands, and looks at her stomach (baby). Then her mother in law comes. At the door, she says that she has a surprise for Ming. Ta, ra tan…, he, he, Michael (Ming’s godson). Yuen meets Michael outside. He has an attention to continuous his study in Hong Kong. Ming is happy to see him. And he says he is happy to will have a younger sibling. In Holland, as he confessed by himself, and proved a good behavior during those recent years, Shan is condemned for 4 years in the jail for involuntary homicide. After learning that, Ming happy, and waiting for him.
Moon goes to the Mall with Ming and Heurng. In the parking station, Moon sees a space,
Ming adjusts the car, and then another car goes in. Liza stops the car. Moon and Heurng, get off, and Moon agues the man, he (Lau Ka Man) gets out and says that, if they saw it why didn’t enter fast. And he goes. Heurng stops her. Moon gets angry, then Ming calls them to go on, and they go to find the other space. Heurng is looking at Baby’s clothes, and she finds some for the one of Ming also. But Ming doesn’t know if it’s a boy or a girl yet, he, he. Moon still talks about Ka Man. Getting from the baby’s store, Ming sees her old good friend, Lau Chun Yan, businessman. They didn’t see each other long time ago. He wonders for whom she buys the baby’s clothes. Heurng answers that they are for her son and Ming’s future baby. Chun Yan is surprise, and congratulates her. Damien is waiting for another one, his brother, Lau Ka Man (Laurence). Then Laurence comes, Ming, Heurng, and Moon, amazed. And Moon: “You?” Damien asks “you know each other also?” Laurence answers “we have a little misunderstanding” Ming, “yes, it’s just a little misunderstanding. It’s ok.” Damien and Lawrence have to go, and say bye. Heurng asks Liza about Damien. Yan was Liza’s classmate in High School (lol)

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PostSubject: Re: [FanFic] A Matter of Customs II   Wed Jun 27, 2007 4:55 am

Episode 2

Morrow, at the office, a new costume has just been transferred to Liza’s customs department, (he, he) it’s Laurence. He takes the place of Kwong. Moon is not happy to have Laurence as boss.
Moon often goes to see Kwong in the hospital, and sees his mother and Kit. Kit and Joyce are waiting for Kwong’s awakening for getting married.
Ming is looking for books that give good advice to take care a baby in a bookstore. Damien is there also. He comes behind her and asks if she needs to be a good mother. Liza surprised, and turns, “ah, it’s you? What are you doing here?” Damien “I am looking for some good romance. Can you advice me?” Then they have lunch together. Damien asks about her husband. Liza tells him about Shan. Damien wishes Liza’s family will be reunited soon. Liza smile “thanks you”. Damien requests her to be her child’s godfather. Liza agrees. After that, Damien comes often to visit Liza and her relative.
At Ming’s customs department, Liza receives a call, that there is drug traffic (He, he). Liza orders her subordinates to execute the operation. Lawrence and Moon are in the same car and observe the situation. Joyce and Joe observe the smugglers. The smugglers execute their acts. Joyce tells Moon, Moon tells Lawrence. Lawrence orders “go”. Joe and Joyce stop the defrauders, and say “Custom”. The smugglers frightened, throw, what they have in the hand to Joe and Joyce and run away. Joyce can catch one of them. But that other 1 is followed by Moon and Lawrence. Moon falls and twists her ankle. Then he is captured by Lawrence. The operation is successful; Ming complements her subordinates. Moon hurts her ankle, Ming tells her to take the rest. Lawrence gives her a flask of medicated oil for taking care on her ankle. Moon thanks him.
Few months later, as she is aged, Ming needs to be operated for delivering the baby. Everybody is waiting with impatience. Then, a doctor gets out, and says that the mother and baby are ok. She gives birth to a daughter. Ming’s mother in Law (Yuen), Michael, Chung Yan, Heurng and Secks are happy. Chung Yan asks the doctor if they can go to see them. Yes, but Ming is still not awake. So they shouldn’t disturb her much. Then, Moon and her family come, and ask how Ming is. Yuen answers that Ming and her daughter are ok. Afterwards, they go to see the baby in the glass cylinder (I am not what we call that). Chung Yan seems adore his god daughter. Hereafter, Liza awakes, and sees everybody smiling. Yuen requests her to give her daughter a name. Liza says that she will ask Shan first, a melancholic smile is appeared from Chung Yan (he, he). Michael is happy to have a younger sister. Heurg and Seks want Liza’s daughter to be their son girlfriend. Then a nurse comes, and tells them that the patience needs to take the rest, everybody leaves the room, except Yuen, who wants to take care of her daughter in Law. Ming wants Yeun to write a letter to Shan for telling him about her and her daughter.

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PostSubject: Re: [FanFic] A Matter of Customs II   Wed Jun 27, 2007 4:57 am

Episode 3

In Netherlands, learning the news from Ming, Shan is so happy, and ready to write one for Ming too. He relates her about his situation in the jail, and he gives a name to their daughter “Lily” Moon visits Kwong as usual. She tells him about Ming. She adds that Lili is adorable and she wishes him to awake soon to see her. (lol) While getting out from the room, she sees Lawrence who comes to visit a friend also. Then, they work together. Moon tells him about Kwong. While listen to Moon, Lawrence feels desolation for her, and hope he awakes soon.
Lily is 2 months; Ming and Yuen enjoy playing with her. Afterward, Michael is back from university. He sees Ming and Yuen playing with Lily; he wants to carry Lily too. The family looks happy.
Chung Yan accompanies Ming to buy Lily’s clothes. While working he sees his daughter, Yee, who is supposed to study in England. Yee is with a boy (David), who seems to be a vandal. Chung Yan is surprise to see Yee, and says, “Yee! What are you doing her?” Yee ignore to see her mother. David asks her if she knows him. She replies that she doesn’t know him and they go. Chung Yan continuous to call her, and follows her, but he is interrupt by the passengers that are quite many on the way. Afterward Yee and David disappear. Liza approaches him and asks “what up?” In the restaurant, Yan explain “Yee is my daughter. Ever since her mother’s died, she doesn’t want to talk with me and goes to abroad (England). She thinks that I cause the death of her mother.” Before, Chung Yan only cared on his deal. So his wife needed to go to the gambling house, and has gambling debt. Chung ever paid the debt for her and alerted her to do not go to the gamble. One day, it’s happen again, he wanted to punish her, but he didn’t know that the situation was as serious. And she was killed by those illegal creditors. Yan felt sorry for this even, and his daughter can’t forgive him. She talks solely with her uncle, Lawrence. Liza feels distressing for him, and places her hand on his shoulder. He places his on hers and smile with some tears in his eyes. (lol)
Liza helps Yan to find Yee’s lodging. Lawrence is looking for her also. He prepares her photo in the newspaper. Moon, Joe, Joyce come to see it also. Liza comes and surprised to see her subordinate in disorder. Seeing Liza, each goes to his post and pretends working. Liza goes in.
Moon’s apartment: finding the key before her house, Moon hears a couple arguing next to her ear. She turns to the house in front of hers, and amazed…

End of the 3rd episode…

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PostSubject: Re: [FanFic] A Matter of Customs II   Wed Jun 27, 2007 4:58 am

Episode 4

Moon turns and recognizes Yee. Yee chases David. David goes and Yee enters in her house. And then Moon calls Lawrence. Lawrence comes and asks Moon where is Yee. Moon shows her house. Lawrence rings the ring. Yee, in the house thinks that it’s David. Opening the door, she says “what do you want more?” Then sees her uncle, she wants to close the door, but Lawrence pushes it and enters with her. Moon enters also. Lawrence wants her to go back home and continuous her study. Yee refuses. Moon helps him to talk with her too, but she rejects Moon, and says that she doesn’t know her … Lawrence tells Yee that her father comes soon. She refuses to see him. If her father comes she won’t talks to Lawrence anymore. Then Yan and Liza come, he, he. Yee rejects them, and throws the pillows, and all things that she can find to them. (lol) then she weeps. Moon’s parents and brother get out and ask what happen. Moon’s mother surprised to see Ming there “Ah Ming, you are here too?” Ming smile. Moon moves back her parents and brother to the house, and says that it’s not their affair, and then enters in the house. Lawrence tells Yan and Ming to go also.
Yee accepts to stay with her uncle.
Lawrence brings Yee to his house, and sees Yu Li. Lawrence lives with his girlfriend, Yu Li. She works as a lawyer. Yu Li prepares a bedroom for Yee.
In another room, Yu Li asks Lawrence about Yee. Lawrence tells her that she stays there for a moment. Yu Li says that she doesn’t mind about how long Yee will stay there. Lawrence thanks her and smile. Then prepare a school for her.
Moon is seeing Kwong and talking to him. Then she notices that Kwong’s finger moves. So she calls the nurse.
Kwong awakes and sees his mother, Kit, Moon, Joyce, Ming, Heurg and Secks. He has a problem for moving his limb. Kit helps him to straighten. Everybody is happy to see him awaked, especially Moon. Kwong looks at Moon, and the others understanding the situation, get out. Kwong thanks Moon. He says that he heard all what she said, and if there was not her to encourage him everyday, he wouldn’t awake, Moon smiles.
At Kon Tin Yea’s company (Kon’s company), Man Long enters in his father’s office, and tells him about Kwong’s awakening. Tin Yea, get angry, and to eliminate him.
Leaving school, Yee sees David who is waiting for her. He wants money. She says that she doesn’t have. So he picks on her, and then picks her purse. Yan sees that, and goes to help her. He pushes David, and then they scuffle. David bit Yan, and Yan falls on the ground. Yee calls help, and David goes (lol). Yee helps her father to straighten, and asks him if he is ok. Yan is happy and smiles.

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PostSubject: Re: [FanFic] A Matter of Customs II   Wed Jun 27, 2007 4:59 am

Episode 5

Kwong can go back home. His mother, Kit and Moon bring him back. Arriving in front of his house, a biker shoots him, but Kit sees it and pushes him. No one is injured. The biker drives away, Kit takes his car and follows him. He tells the others ICAC to arrest him also. Then that biker is killed by road accident.
Kwong knows who wants to kill him. He is scared about his family’s security, so he decides to goes always and drops a letter to his mother. “Don’t worry about me; I go where I need to go… take care…” Moon lost Kwong again.

2 years and 6 months later, Michael is congratulated from college. He is looking for a job. Yuen (Ming’s mother in law) travels in the world (lol)
Lily is playing in a park next to her house with her mother (Ming) and her godfather (Yan). Lily runs, Liza follows her. Then, uppp, Lily knocks someone. This one says “You should be careful!” Liza straightens herself, and stays immobile. She is happy and surprised to see Shan. Ming nears him; some teardrop is delivering from her eyes and smiles. He asks her if she is Lily. Ming nods in approval. Ming tells Lily to call him Daddy. Lily: “Dady”. Both laugh.
After looking at them with hopeless, Yan nears them and introduce himself to Shan. Ming is sorry, coz, she completely forgot him. Yan: “it’s ok. I don’t want to bother you. So goodbye, see you.” He goes. Ming and Shan looks at each other and smile. Shan carries Lily and they enter in the house.
In the house, Lily is playing with Michael, Liza, cooking and Danny helps her. Liza asks him why he comes back before the anticipated date. He says that as his behavior was well in the jail, they released him before the anticipated date. (he, he) Shan hugs Ming’s waist from her back, and says that he misses her. (ha, ha, plz dun be rot!) Ming wants him to release her because she doesn’t want her children see her like that. (he, he)
Few hours later, Lily is sleeping in her bed and Michael in his.
Ming and Shan are sitting in the living room. They are neck and neck (lol). Shan says that he misses her. He carved the number of the day on the wall everyday. He wanted that the day goes forward faster. Ming missed him also. They look at each other, and ready to … (he, he). Just when Shan’s lip touches the one of Ming (ha, ha) Lily cries. They stop their action, Very Happy and Shan: “ohh no” Then they go to see her. Lily used to sleep with her mother and when she doesn’t see Ming, she is scared. Finally, Lily sleeps in the middle of her parent until the Sun-up.

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PostSubject: Re: [FanFic] A Matter of Customs II   Wed Jun 27, 2007 4:59 am

Episode 6

Morning, Ming prepares the table for breakfast. Shan looks at her and smiles. Then Michael comes, and enjoys seeing delicious food on the table.
Shan is looking for a job. But as he is aged, and used to be sent to the jail, it’s difficult for him to find the job. So Ming tries to help him discreetly. Shan brings Ming to her office. Before getting out from the car, Ming gives Shan a kiss on his lip, (ha, ha). Shan: “Have a good day, honey” (Beeerk, too sweet) Ming: “bye”.
Turning, she sees her subordinates who are looking at them, but they pretend to do not see anything. Ming reddened. Joe, Pui Ling, Moon, talk to each other in intention to tease Ming and Shan, then they enter.
Shan bring Lily to kindergarten. Then go to find the job, but no one wants him.
Shan is eating noodle for lunch, watching tv, reading news for finding the job, however Liza is executing an dangerous operation. Night, Shan looks at Lily sleeping, then goes to sit in the living room, it is 10 pm, Ming does not come yet. Shan thinks that he is useless, his wife works her supporting the family, but he can’t do anything. Then Ming comes, he smile at her. Ming doesn’t take dinner yet. So, Shan cooks noodle for her. Ming nears him, and says that looks delicious. Shan replies that he can do only that, and now he becomes a househusband (he, he). Ming hugs him from his back, and says, “If they don’t want you to work for them, it is his lost. Don’t dropout easily! It’s not your instinct.”
Shan: “ok, backed, wanna taste?” Ming: “No”. Then she kisses him (ha, ha), (um, how can I write it?)
Morrow, Shan goes to find a job, as usual, and he is accepted. He is happy. And he discovers later that the owner is Chung Yan. He thinks that it’s thanks to his wife that he can find the job.
Back home, he is not happy, he is sitting in the living room. Ming comes and asks him how about the day. He replies “you know well, why you pretend to do not know?” Ming surprised on what he says. Shan ads: “Chung Yan didn’t tell you?” Ming, seemed tired, moves to sit next to him, and place her head on his shoulder, “Tell what? I really dun know”. Shan believes his wife, and says: “I am hired in Chung Yan’s company.” Ming: “Good.” “No good, if he didn’t know you, he wouldn’t accept me. Ok, I will renounce my job tomorrow.” Ming, leaving his shoulder, says: “What? Now, how old are you? And you even have been in the jail. You don’t want me to support and finance all the family’s charge, I hope? Shan is sorry, and promise to work hard for the success, and he hugs her, both smiles. (He, he)

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PostSubject: Re: [FanFic] A Matter of Customs II   Wed Jun 27, 2007 5:00 am

Episode 7

Shan goes to his office for the first time. Chung Yan gives him a place as a finance manager. Others staffs welcome him.
Ming and Shan invite Chung Yan and his daughter (Yee) for the dinner in their house. Lily waits for her godfather with impatience.
Chung Yan and Yee come, Lily, happy, runs to welcome Chung Yan. Lily: “godfather!” Chung Yan: “ohm my dear Lily” and he carries her. Chung Yan: “Ohh, too heavy, um, you have grown up my dear. Do you know what I have for you?” Then he gives her a puzzle. Lily: “Thank you. You know? I miss you, when you bring me to the amusement park again?” Chung Yan: “if you get 100 points for school’s exam, I will bring you.” Lily: “ok, promise?” Ming and Shan look at them, and laugh. But Shan is a bit jealous to see his daughter enjoying with Chung Yan. Yee, seeing Michael preparing the table, nears him and asks him how she can help him. Yee seems to be interesting in Michael (lol). After the dinner, Michael helps Lily to assemble the puzzle. Yee comes to bothers. She says that she doesn’t understand integral in Math, she needs the explication. So he demonstrates her, but she doesn’t listen to him. She regards him, and smile.
Ming is glad that Yee forgives him, and the family is unit. Lily can’t find a piece of the puzzle, and want Chung Yan to help her. Shan wants to help her, but she doesn’t want she wants Chung Yan, lol. Shan feels rejected by his daughter.
Few hours later, Shan is lying on his bed; Ming gets out from the bathroom. Shan is in the bad mud. Ming goes on the bed, and asks him why he does that head. He tells him that he is jealous because Lily seems to like Yan most than him. Liza laughs. Shan wonders why she laughs. Ming: “Lily is just a little girl; Yan took good care on her as his own daughter during these last years when you are not here. It’s normal, that she treat him better than you.” Shan: “Yeaaa, he should want to take my place forever.” Liza looks at him: “what are you talking about?” Shan, displeased: “not thing, just I shouldn’t accept to work for his company. I dun need his help.” Then he sulks, turns his back to Ming, and sleeps. Liza wants to talk to him more, but as she sees him ignoring her, so she gets angry also.
Morrow, Ming goes to her office as usual. The customs-officers have an important operation again. During the operation, Moon is nearly killed by a smuggler, but she is helped by Lawrence, then bullet goes through his shoulder. Moon, panicky, doesn’t know what to do. Then this smuggler is arrested by Joe. Ming calls the ambulance.
In the hospital, Ming, Moon and Joe are in the front of ICU’s room. Yu Li, Chung Yan, Yee come. Yan asks Liza what’s happen. Moon says that it’s cause of her. If he didn’t help her, the one who should be in the ICU’s room is her, not him. Yu Li gets angry, moves to place just next to the door. She was worried about Lawrence. Then the doctor gets out, and asks who the Lawrence’s relative is. Yan says that he is his brother.

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PostSubject: Re: [FanFic] A Matter of Customs II   Wed Jun 27, 2007 5:01 am

Episode 8

The doctor tells him, luckily the bullet didn’t go to the important part of his brother’s body, so he is ok now, but as the patient lost a lot of blood, so he needs a while for awaking. Everybody is happy. Yu Li stay with him. Moon looks at him from the door. She cares on him. Getting out, Ming notices that the tires of her car are burst by someone. Yan comes and asks her if she need help. Then he proposes to bring her to the house.
Reaching her house, Ming leaves the car and thanks Yan. Suddenly, 2 smugglers arrive, and start to attack her. Yan sees that, goes to help her, but he is injured. Luckily, they reach to subdue that smuggler, and then they run away. Ming sees Yan’s injure. She wants to bring him to the hospital, but Yan refuses, he says that it’s not serious, just put the medicine on, it’ll ok. So Liza tells to get on her house for taking care on his injure. He accepts. Ming looks for the medicine, and then she tells him to take off his shirt for her disinfecting his injure. While disinfecting his injure, Yan looks at Ah Jie, and smiles, (lol). After nursing him, Ming gives him Shan’s shirt to put on, because his shirt is dirtied by blood. Ming is arranging her medicine’s in the kitchen. When Yan is putting the shirt in, Shan arrives, and is amazed. Then, Ming gets out from the kitchen. Without seeing Shan, she asks Yan, if the shirt watches him. Then Shan gets really mad. He tightens his hands. Ming sees Shan, and asks him with a surprise, “You are back”. Without saying anything, Shan nears Yan, and hits him. Ming arrests him: “Are you crazy? Why do you behave like that? Stop” Shan still hits Yan. Yan hurts his injure. Liza: “Stop! Do you know what are you doing?” Then she pushes him, and Shan fells. Afterward, she helps Yan to straighten and get out. Ming is sorry. Yan says that it’s ok. He understands that Shan is getting jealous. So he is sorry for making Shan jealous. Ming says that it’s not Yan’s fault. It’s Shan’s. He loses the reason.
Getting in, Ming sees Shan on the sofa. She goes straight to the bedroom, but she is stopped by Shan. Shan wants her to explain about Yan (he, he). Ming doesn’t want to say anything. She reproaches him to do not trust her. She is very angry with him. She enters in her room while slamming the door. Shan follows her. Ming is thinking about the afternoon attack. She wonders who those 2 smugglers are. While seeing her ignoring him, he goes straight to the bathroom. Then he sees a shirt with some stain of blood in the clothes’ basket. Then he looks at the trashes’ basket, and sees the cotton ect… He knows that he was wrong to accuse Ming and Yan.
He gets out from the bathroom, and tells Ming that he saw a shirt… He asks her if it belong Yan. Ming doesn’t reply. He wonders what’s happen to them. Ming still keeps dark, and goes straight to the bathroom. Shan arrests her. He is sorry, and begs her to forgive him.

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Favorite drama: ATE, WOIL, WOIL2, AMOC
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PostSubject: Re: [FanFic] A Matter of Customs II   Wed Jun 27, 2007 5:02 am

Episode 9

Ming got mad because Shan didn’t trust her. She says that how can they live together without confidence.
Then the phone rings. We recall for going to find Lily in the kindergarten. Ming gets ready for going to find Lily. Shan is ready also. Ming says that it’s ok, she goes. Then Michael comes. Shan tells him “ok, let’s go to find Lily and go to the restaurant for the dinner” Michael: “cool, let me change my cloth first.” Michael enters in his bedroom.
Ming looks at Shan with a bad mood. Shan laughs at her, then near her. He takes her waist and says: “you still get mad? Please, don’t be angry with me! Ok, tomorrow, I will beg Yan’s pardon. Um, plz, I am soooo sorry.” Ming still keeps her angry face, and then Shan gives a kiss on her cheek. (lol) Ming gets embarrassed while seeing Michael getting out from his bedroom. Michael smiles at them, and say: “ok, we can go.” Shan looks at Ming and smiles. Ming goes.
Few hours later, Shan is driving. Ming, Michael, Lily is around. Shan asks Lily what she wants to eat. Lily: “McDo.” Michael: “No, not McDonald. Shu Chi or Japanese Food is better” Lily: “no, no, want Mcdo.” Ming: “ok, McDonald for today, and Japanese Food, tomorrow.” Shan looks at her and asks “you will be free tomorrow for taking dinner out with us?” Ming: “Let’s see”<br>McDo’s house:
Lily: “I want Chicken burger”
Michael: “No chicken for you. Don’t worry to get Bird Flu”
Ming: (to Michael) “why you talk to your sister like that?” (To Lily) “There is no chicken, so, do you want Ham Burger?”
Lily: “Noo, I am worried about insane beef.” Ming and Shan laugh.
Shan: “so what do you want? French Fries? Apple fried?”
Lily: “Ai wannnt to be thin like Mummy, noo French Fries, no Apple fried. Sad” Ming and Shan laugh again. Very Happy
Michael: “so we should go to the Japanese Resto.”<br>Shan: “Ha, ha, not as thin as your mother. (Low) She is too thin, a little fatter is better. Wink
Ming throws her regard on Shan.
Lily: (to Shan) “So Mum doesn’t look good?” :Smile
Shan, looking at Ming 8-), afraid that she gets angry, says: “Your mother is great like that. But so you are so young. If you get a little fatter, there’s no problem.” Michael: “ok, I gonna go to find my ham burger. Anyone want something?” And then he crosses Hearng, Seks, and their son (Thierry). Ming and Shan are delighted to meet Hearng and Seks. Seks looks at Lily and asks them if she is his future daughter in law, she looks cute. Shan asks why they talk about that already, they are still young. They are free to choose the ones that please them. Of course Seks is just kidding. Lily asks them what they are talking about. They laugh.

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PostSubject: Re: [FanFic] A Matter of Customs II   Wed Jun 27, 2007 5:04 am

Episode 10

Yan get sick. He can’t go to his office. So, Shan and Ming go to visit him. Shan is sorry for last day. Yan was not angry at him. Shan also thanks him for helping his wife.
Shan wants to resign his job at Yan’s company. Yan doesn’t want him to leave him. He knows that Shan doesn’t want to be his subordinate. So he proposes to share him his company’s market share. Lol, and Shan and Ming accept to invest in this company. (Suppose they have money, lol).
Later, at the office, Yan presents Shan another share holder, Kon Tin Yee and his son Man Long (ha, ha). Of course, Shan doesn’t know them, but they know him very well, lol.
In Tin Yee’s office, Tin Yee and Man Long are talking about Shan. They plan to pain him.
The custom’s team takes it holiday for 5 days. Joe’s family has a house on an island (ok, give me a name). So he proposes them to take their holiday there. Each can bring his companion. Lawrence comes with Yu Li, Joyce with Kit, Seks and Heurng, Moon, Joe, alone, Ming doesn’t know yet if Shan can go with her or not.
At home, Liza asks Shan if he wanna go with her and Lily. Shan says that he busy, but he tries to find time, because he really wants to go with her and Lily, lol. Shan can finally go. Michael also wants to go with them. He prefers staying at home. Lawrence proposes his brother to go there to relax. After hearing that Ming goes, so he also goes, lol. Chun Yan also has a big house there, so he proposes them to stay there.
The day comes; Moon arrives at the port, and sees Seks, Heurg, Joe, Lawrence and Yu Li there. Joe blames her to be late. Then Ming, Shan, Michael, and Lily arrive. Ming is sorry to be late. Joe says that it’s ok. It’s not time yet. Mr Lau doesn’t come yet. Moon says that he is not fair. He argues her for being late. But he doesn’t say anything to Ming. Ming tells them that they are equal now; they don’t need to thread her as Madam. Then Chun Yan and Yee come, and they get on the boat.
On the boat, Yee stays next to Michael. She tries to talk with him about the landscape and the trip. Everybody seems to enjoy the pure atmosphere. Lily wants to get on the bar of the head of the boat, and fly like Rose in Titanic (lol). Shan holds her to stand on the bar, Ming smiles. Lily calls her to come and fly with her. Ming comes to help Shan to hold Lily. Lily closes her eyes, Ming and Shan look at each other and smile. Yan looks at them, and seems jealous. Lawrence nears him, and asks him what’s happen. He says “nothing” and goes to find the drink. Then he calls everybody to take snack.
Arriving, everybody admire the beautiful landscape and appreciate the pure atmosphere. After sharing the room to anyone, Yan tells them about the plan of the trip. They plan to go to the waterfall, in the forest and the cave. (lol)

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PostSubject: Re: [FanFic] A Matter of Customs II   Wed Jun 27, 2007 5:05 am

Episode 11

They have a barbecue for dinner. Moon barbecue a beefsteak and gives Laurence, he gives it to Yu Li, but she refuse. She says that Moon makes it for him not her. Lol, she should be jealous. Ming notices that Moon loves Laurence. Yan gives Ming a slice of pig. Shan says that pig has a lot of grease; it’s good for her heath, he says that Ming like eating vegetable and fish, so he gives her the potatoes, tomatoes and fish, Ming thanks him. Ming doesn’t want to hurt Yan’s good will, so she takes the slice of pig. Shan has a bad mood.
Joyce and Moon are in the same room. Joyce doesn’t stop to fix Moon’s face. Moon asks her what’s up. Lol, Joyce asks her if she loves Lawrence, and tells her if loves him, she should tell him…
Ming gets out from the bathroom. She doesn’t see Lily. She asks Shan where is Lily? Lol, Lily wants to stay with Yan. Ming asks him why he lets her to go to bother him. He says that he didn’t let her go, she wants to stay with him, and of course she threads him as her father. And he shows his bad mood. Liza: “what’s up again? Then Ming wanna go to find Lily. Shan prevent her to go. Ha, ha, he doesn’t want her to bother them, lol
Morning, they are divided in group. Each group has a copy of the map of the forest to each group. Lawrence, Yu Li, Moon, Joe, Yee are in the same group, Seks, Heurng, Kit, Joyce, Michael have 1. Ming, Shan, Yan, Lily in a group. Although they are divided in group, they still work together until the waterfall. In the forest, there are 2 smugglers are observing them. They take their sandwich next to the waterfall. They enjoy receiving some drops of the fresh water on their face.
They cross the stream to the other side. Shan carries Lily on his back. Ming slips, and is nearly fallen. Shan carrying heavy Lily, misses Ming’s hand, lol, luckily, Yan can catch her. Shan tells her to be careful, the way is slippery. Then he holds her hand. Arriving on the other side of the stream, Yan tells each group to take a path, and then they will meet in the cave, because they are 3 ways, and anyway can bring them to the cave. Yee wants to go with Michael. But her uncle, Lawrence tells her to stay with him.
During the pathway, Yu Li complains on the heat and the tiredness. Moon brings water for her and Lawrence. They thank her. Yu Li still argue Lawrence for calling her to go there. Moon looks at them disputing. Joe asks her there is something interesting to see their dispute, and gives her the water. Yee also complains with the heat. She pours the water on her. Lawrence scolds her. The water is for drink. So they don’t have anything to drink anymore. Yee is angry, and go away. Lawrence follows her, but stopped by Yu Li. But he still goes to find Yee. Moon says that she goes him, he smile. Yu Li gets mad.
Other side, Ming and Yan, are seeing the map. Shan asks them where they should go. Ming thinks that they best path is the left one. They can arrive faster by this way. Shan says: “I trust you, hope you don’t show the wrong path.” Yan: “can do otherwise, she is Madam, we should listen to her.” And they go. Lily asks them when they arrive; Yan tells her that they are nearly arrived. They continuous walking.

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PostSubject: Re: [FanFic] A Matter of Customs II   Wed Jun 27, 2007 5:06 am

Episode 12

Then, there is a noise from afar. Like somebody is cutting the tree. They near the noise. Seeing, Shan asks Ming if she think that they have the license for cutting the tree in this forest. Ming says that she doesn¡¯t think that they have the permit. Ming takes out her hand phone, but it doesn¡¯t have the service. Not seeing them, the 2 smugglers come to talk with the one controlling the slurries cutting the trees. One says that they saw many people in the forest; they should be the tourist, but not sure. So they should stop deforesting a while. Then Lily says that she wants to go to the wc. Shan shut out the noise from Lily¡¯s mouth with his hand. But they still hear lol. One of the smugglers: ¡°there is someone.¡± Yan: ¡°they hear us, let¡¯s go¡±. Then they run away. The smugglers shoot them, but, fail. The others hear the sound of the bullet, they wonder what¡¯s happen. Lawrence, Moon, Joe, try to know where the noise is from.
The smugglers chase Liza, Shan, Yan and Lily. Ming tells Shan, Yan and Lily to go first, and she takes out her gun to confront against them. Lol, Shan takes her gun, and gives Lily to her, and tells her to go first, then he shout, shout, shout¡¦ Of course, he just wastes the bullet, after the 6th shout; there are no more bullets in the gun, lol. At that time they arrive at the edge of the cliff (not sure about the word, it¡¯s not really a cliff, but the side superior of the waterfall). Lol, Ming, Shan, Yan are ready to jump into the cliff, but they are worried about Lily. Then those smugglers arrive at their back, they are ready to shoot, Ming, Shan, Yan look at each other. Shan tightens Lily in his arms, and then they jump into the cliff. That spiteful man threw their regard into the cliff. They think that they are died, so they go. They prepare to move their activity because of the others who come find these 4 people. Yee, afraid, works alone in the forest, and then meets the group of Seck, Heurng, Kit, Joyce and Michael. Yee is very happy, and run to hug, Michael. Moon and Lawrence can¡¯t find Yee, and they seem to be lost in the forest.
Shan gets out from the water with Lily. Lily is faint. Shan calls her and try to bring out the water from her stomach (sorry, my English is poor, dun no what we say that).
Lily awakes, Shan is happy. While awaking, Lily calls ¡°mom, mom, I feels bad¡¦¡± then Shan looks for Ming in the stream, but she is not found. Ming and Yan should be taken away by the current of the water. Shan is worried about Ming. (lol, it seems that he doesn¡¯t care on Yan, ha, ha). Shan sees that Lily feels bad so, he goes back to find help.
Ming and Yan are taken to the lower stage of the waterfall of the mountain. (Poor them)
Yan gets out from the water. Putting his backpack on the stream bank, he sees Ming fainted. He, working difficultly goes to find her and brings her to the stream bank. He helps her to awake by letting the air in her mouth (ha, ha, ummm). Ming awakes, and she thanks him

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PostSubject: Re: [FanFic] A Matter of Customs II   Wed Jun 27, 2007 5:06 am

Episode 13

Their clothes are wet. The weather becomes lukewarm. The Sunset starts to appear. And they can not find the path for going back. So they just hope that the others come to help them. They are hungry; the sandwiches in the backpack are also wet. They just can drink, (poor them!)
Shan finds Seks and the others. They are surprise to see only Shan and Lily. Shan tells them to find Ming and Yan. As it’s a bit night, and they don’t know the forest well, Kit (Kong’s brother) says that they should go back then ask the police to help them. On the path they see Yu Li and Joe, who are looking for Lawrence, Moon, and Yee… And then they go back to the house and find help from the police.
Lawrence and Moon are lost in the forest. They can’t find the way for the return. It is at full moon and well-disposed, they take their sandwiched and water for the dinner. Moon's handkerchief is gone, she goes then to find it, then slips, luckily, Lawrence is there to help her, lol. He hold her hand and tirer her back, but she falls on him lol. Both are embarrassed, lol. Moon thanks him, then she smile, lol.
On the other side, Ming and Yan are using their wet lighter to burn the wood to dry their jacket etc…
Ming is cold. Yan takes his jacket dried and puts on Ming, and tell her to take off her wet T-Shirt, lol.
At night, Ming seems to have cold. She talks while sleeping: &quot;I am cold.&quot; Yan nears her, and touch her forehead, she gets temperature. So he pose Ming against the tree, then go to get the handkerchief wet for taking off Ming's temperature. Ming still says that she is cold, so he hugs her, lol (he, he).
The police is looking for Ming, Yan, Lawrence and Moon. Shan is worried about Ming, he can't sleep. He wants to go to look for them too, but Heurng tells him that he is tired, let the police do their work.
At down, they find Lawrence and Moon. Shan goes to find Ming with Seks, Kit and Joe.
Ming awaks and find that she was on Yan's shoulder all night. She is sorry for bother him all night. Ming still feels bad. So Yan takes her on his back lol.
Shan calls Ming uncount time in the forest, but no reply. Bur they don't give it up. THey continuous to call Ming and Yan, then they find them. Shan is a little disaspointed to see Ming on Yan's back, but he is very happy to see her. Ming and Yan are happy to see them too.

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PostSubject: Re: [FanFic] A Matter of Customs II   Wed Jun 27, 2007 5:07 am

Episode 14

Back to the holiday’s house, Ming, being sick, is sleeping on the bed. Shan takes care on her. Then she awakes, she yells “Lily!” Shan call her. (lol) He asks her if she is ok. Ming asks him where is Lily. He answers that Lily is ok; Heurng and Seks are taking care on her. Ming is thirsty, so Shan goes to find the water for her. Then Yan comes. (lol) He asks her how she is doing. She gets better now. She remembers that she got Yan’s jacket, she wants to give him back. But Yan says that it’s ok. He needn’t it. Suddenly, he has arm-ach. Ming is sorry for having slept on this shoulder all night. At that time, Shan is at the door, hearing all what they say. Lol, he gets jealous, but doesn’t sign anything, Shan, coming in, cuts their conversation: “Ming, this is the water for you.” Yan: “Shan!” Shan: “hello.” Yan: “ok, I won’t disturb you again, I gonna go, (to Shan) take good care on her!” He smiles at them. Ming also smiles at him.
While Yan getting out, Shan looks at Ming and says: “you look happy.” Ming “What are you expecting to?” Shan doesn’t want to turn the situation to a bad one; he says “nothing. Just, I was ill at ease when I saw you getting pain, but seeing your smile, it makes me good. Ming smile again.
Later, Ming and Lily are recovered. So they can get back to their hometown.
Getting home, Ming stows their baggage, and prepare to put the dirty clothes in the washing machine. Then see Yan’s jacket. She reminds when Yan put it on her, hugged her, and carried her… And then she asked herself why is she thinking about that? While thinking, she doesn’t know that Shan is observing her. Shan nears her and asks what’s wrong, why she stops putting the clothes in the washing machine. And he asks her if that jacket is Yan’s. Ming says yes, and she thinks to give him back after washing it. Shan says “no one can know what’s happen exactly to you 2 in the forest.” Ming: “what are you expecting to again?” Shan says that maybe Ming just considers him as her friend, but he can notice that Yan loves her. Ming doesn’t believe him and gets mad, blaming him to be jealous for nothing.
Tomorrow morning, Ming brings Lily to kindergarten as usual.
In customs’ department, about 5 pm, Ming receives a call from Lily’s teacher, asking her when she comes to find her. Lily is waiting for her. Ming rushes to get Lily’s school.
Before the portal of school, Lily’s teacher, holding Liza’s hand, talks with the mothers of other children. Lily, seeing her father’s car, yells “daddy”, then she leaves her teacher’s hand, and rushes in to the car.

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PostSubject: Re: [FanFic] A Matter of Customs II   Wed Jun 27, 2007 5:08 am

Episode 15

After, Ming comes with her red car convertible. She calls: “teacher Fang!” Teacher: “Mrs Tao!” Ming asks her where is Lily. She replies that she went with her father already. Ming is surprise to hear that. Then she calls Shan. Shan is happy to receive Ming’s call. Ming asks her why he went to find Lily without telling her. Shan doesn’t understand. He is at his office. Lily is not with him. Ming adds more: “Her teacher said that Lily called father before getting on the car.” Shan changes his mood: “not only me, she calls father” (lol) Ming knows that he means Shan, so she disconnects her hand phone. Shan remembers to have just seen Yan at his office, so how come he can go to find Lily. Then he tries to call Ming, but the network is busy, she is using the phone for calling Yan. Of course, Yan doesn’t know, neither. They start to be worried about Lily. They wonder why she called him “daddy.” Then Ming calls Michael. He doesn’t know, neither.
In Ming and Shan’s house, Ming, Michael, Heurg are very worried about Lily, and try to find her by calling to ones who know her. Then Moon and Lawrence come, Ming asks them if they find Lily. Moon: “No.” Then Shan and Yan come. It’s the same result. Ming wants to complain to the police. But Shan says that it’s not 24 hour yet, so they can’t. Ming cries and Shan hugs her. Then someone rings at the door. Ming rushes to the door, and sees her mother in law (Yuen) coming back from her trip. Ming throws her regard all around her mother, hoping to see Lily, but not. Yuen wonder why she is not happy to see her. She moves her hand in front of Ming’s eyes; Ming drops the tears, and falls on her mother’s bosom: “Mom”. Yuen thinks that Ming is happy to see her, that why she cry. So she says: “Oh, my dear, I am here now. I won’t leave you again. Don’t cry!” Then they get in. Moon: “grand mother!” and the others: “Aunty!” She is surprise to see many people in the living room. She asks them then if they come to welcome her, “…but where is my dear Lily?” Yan, standing nearby Ming, tells her the true. Then the phone rings. Ming rushes to the phone. A man’s voice sounds. He says that if they want to get Lily back, they have to give them 10 millions $ in 3 days. Ming tells: “10 millions? How can we believe you?” Then that one lets her hear Lily’s voice: “Mammy! please help me!” Ming yells: “Lily! Lily!” The kidnapper takes down the phone. Ming still yells “Lily!!!!” several times. Everybody near Ming and Shan asks her if it’s Lily, if she is kidnapped, what the kidnapper wants. Ming tells that that he wants 10 millions in 3 days. Everybody is surprise to hear that. The sum is much, Ming and Shan try to find the money. Yuen can help some, Yan can help them too, but Shan doesn’t want his money (lol).
Lawrence tells them to tell the police, but Ming, worried about Lily’s security, doesn’t want.

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PostSubject: Re: [FanFic] A Matter of Customs II   Wed Jun 27, 2007 5:08 am

Episode 16

As the time is short, they accept Yan’s good will. After preparing the money, the kidnapper calls them and wants Shan to bring the money for him.
At home, Ming is waiting for good news from Shan. In the other side, Shan goes to the place where was the appointment. In fact, they needn’t only the money, but also Shan. They catch Shan in the car, and bring him to the house in which Lily is found. Shan calls Lily, They kick and punch him brutally. Shan says to the kidnappers: “I brought you the money, so you should release her. She is too young to support this situation.” They laugh: “ha, ha, ha.” Then another man come. Lol, it’s Kon Man Long (Jackie’s brother). Shan recognize him. Long says: “ha, ha, we keep the money, and we will release no one. Do you want your wife to come to accompany you? Ha, ha, I want to see you relative less. It will teach a lesson that do not to betray the Master (Boss of the mafia).”<br>Shan is surprise to hear that: “You are sent by Master? Who is he? May I know before I am going to die?” Long: “ha, ha, you are going to die, there is no interest to know that.” Long is Kon Tin Yea’s son, so Shan can guess that the Boss is Kon Tin Yea.
Shan: “Kon Tin Yea?” Long: “ok, you are going to die, so I will tell you who want to kill you. Jacky is my sister. My father can’t let the ones who have betrayed him or his children live easily. You betrayed him, and is the cause of his daughter’s death. So he can’t let you and your family alive.” Shan: “The one that you want is me. So release my daughter. She is innocent and too young.”<br>Ming’s house: Ming is worried to do not receive Shan’s or the kidnapper’s call. She wonders what’s happen to Shan, so they call the police. Then they receive a call from a mysterious man. He tells them about the place where we can find Shan and Lily.
In the other side, Long nears Lily: “right, she is very young. But if she can’t see the sun anymore, it’s cause of her father. I’m so sorry little.” He gets out his gun and points her. Shan yells: “Noooooooooo!” Suddenly, there is a noise outside. Long orders his subordinates to go to see it. The 2 kidnappers are knocked by Kwong (Wong Hei), and then he gets in. Long thinks that it’s his men, he asks what’s that noise. Then Kwong points him. He tells him to release Shan and Lily, he already call the police. Obviously, Kwong have observed all activities of Kon’s family. He also has the evident of Kon Tin Yea and Long’s smug. Suddenly, the kidnapper awake. Kwong turn to them, Long approaches him and fight. Finally, Kwong is also cached by them.

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PostSubject: Re: [FanFic] A Matter of Customs II   Wed Jun 27, 2007 5:09 am

Episode 17

Ming, the others and the police reach that house in the bush (on the foot hill). When they get in the house they find only Lily. Lily is vane, weak, lying on the floor. While seeing her, Ming rushes to her, cries, hugs her, and says: “Lily, my dear!” Lily: “Mom, help me.” Ming: “don’t worry, you are in the security now. Oh, my dear, please don’t leave me again.” Lily: “Mom, help daddy!” Ming: “your dad?” Then she sees the watch that I bought for Shan on the floor. Ming picks it up. Someone enters and says that they saw the trace of the car’s tires on the way to the mountain. The police decide to follow the trace. Ming wants to go with them too. She gives Lily to Moon for bringing her to the hospital.
The police accept Ming to go with them. But Ming drives her own car. Lawrence goes with her too. The police, Ming and Lawrence chase after Long’s car. On the mountain, the street is narrow and difficult to drive. Long and the police fire each other. Ming’s car receive some bullets on too. The police’s car loses its balance, and turns finally upside down. Ming and Lawrence continuous to chase Long’s car. When both cars reach the same level, Ming and Lawrence see Shan and Kwong in the car. Then Long fire them (ohhhh too bored to write)… Lawrence fire them too, and gets to kill the driver of Long’s car, and that car have to be stopped. Ming brakes the car brusquely. The one who drive Long’s car also stop the car. Shan and Kwong are injured and point by Long and the other smuggler. Ming and Lawrence, hidden by the car, point them and tell them to release the hostages. Long gets out from the car, fire Shan’s leg and takes Kwong in hostage. Then another smuggler gets out and takes Shan in hostage. Long tells Ming and Lawrence to leave their gun. If not he will kill Kwong and Shan. Then they leave it. Long fires Ming and Lawrence, but he misses them. When Long fires them, Kwong can take advantage of this situation to punch Long and run away. Long shoots him, but there is no more bullet in his gun. At that time, Ming get killing the other smuggler, so Long takes his gun and Shan away. Ming tells Lawrence to take care on Kwong, and she chases after Long. Ming chases after Long until the cliff. Shan tells her to go away, do not chase after them again. Ming tells Long to give up. The police will come, he can’t escape. Long says that if he will die he wants Shan and Ming die with him too. So he point Shan’s head and is ready to fire it, Ming shoots his hand first, lol. Then Shan punches him with his elbow, and he falls in the cliff. While falling he catches Shan’s foot. So Shan falls and slides down the cliff. Ming rushes to catch Shan’s hand. At the same time, Shan grabs the stone on the side of the cliff, and kicks Long down. Ming gets to catch Shan’s hand, and Shan try his best to climb, but his leg ache makes him very difficult to scale. Shan gets finally on the side. Both are very happy to see each other, and Ming hugs her husband tightly.

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PostSubject: Re: [FanFic] A Matter of Customs II   Wed Jun 27, 2007 5:11 am

Episode 18

In the hospital:
Moon comes to visit Kwong with the others. Moon is touched to see Kwong again. She sobs. Kwong looks at her and says: “Please, don’t show your tear! You know I can’t bear it.” Moon smile. Kwong’s mother, weeping, approaches him, and says: “you are hateful. Why you made me worried again and again?” Kwong: “Don’t worry, I won’t leave you anymore. Kon Tin Yea has been sent to the jail. So I don’t anything to be worried anymore.” Then he looks at Moon. Moon smile, then goes out. In the passageway, she meets Lawrence and Yu Li. Lawrence and Yu Li have just visited Shan. Lawrence tells her that they are going to get married, so he invite her for the wedding. Moon is heart broken, but she smile and says: “Congratulation. I will go sure” then she goes while dropping a drop of tear.
Back home, in Shan’s room, Ming, lying on Shan’s shoulder, talks with Shan about Lawrence’s wedding. Ming asks Shan what they will buy for them. Shan says that it’s up to Ming, lol. Ming tells him that if there wasn’t this problem, she wouldn’t know how much she loves him and she needs him. Shan confesses that it’s his fault. He was always getting jealous. He has to trust her and take care on her feeling more. Ming hug him and he kisses her lol.
During Lawrence and Yu Li’s wedding, everybody comes. Kwong is happy to see Moon. Moon smiles at him. Kwong: “You looks so pretty today.” Moon: “Thanks u, you also looks handsome.” Ming, Shan and Lily come to congratulate Lawrence and Yu Li. Then they learn that Joyce (Elsa) and Kit are going to get married too.
Getting out from the church, Yu Li throws the bunch of flower in the air. Moon gets it, lol. She is happy. She looks at Kwong and smiles. Kwong also smiles.
While taking the buffet, Shan bring food for Ming. Yan comes to welcome them. He asks them if they enjoy the ceremony. Of course yes, they can’t say no, lol. Shan goes to find the drink for Ming. Yan tells her to keep this happy family… Ming smiles then she goes to join Shan.
At home, in the living room Shan asks her what were they talking about. Ming says that she doesn’t want he know. Shan says that the wedding is only once in the life. He regrets that their wedding didn’t take place in as such great ambiance. Ming: “I hope you didn’t mean to take another one.” Shan: “the day before I went to China and arrested by the customs leaded by Madam Lui Fok Ming, I promised you to take you along the world. Do you remember? Do you want to take one more honeymoon?” Ming: “of course I remember. But now, Lily has class, we can’t travel.” Shan: “Let Lily stay with aunty. She will bother us.” Ming pretends to be angry: “You don’t want Lily? No Lily, I won’t go.” Shan: “Lily is my daughter. Of course I love her, but…but…” Ming: “Lily is important to me. But… But… ok, we will bring her another time.” Both smile.
Lily standing on their back: “Heuk, heuk………….” Ming and Shan: “Lily, What are you doing here? Why do you cry?” Lily: “heuk, heuk……., you don’t want me… Heuk, heuk.” Ming and Shan look at each other and do a sad face.

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PostSubject: Re: [FanFic] A Matter of Customs II   Mon Jul 09, 2007 10:41 pm

i like this story
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